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Shall I choose not to know you and let you not know me?
Shall we choose to be toads at the bottom of the well?
While knowing we could be much more than that
Like to be the birds flying freely in the sky of freedom and hope?
As the meaning of life is just a humpty dumpty egg
Closed outside well covered the inside open space
Round and firm, yet fragile and weak.
If we were to break it down
Shall we be able to construct it back?
If we could leave behind
Our masculine and feminine
Yellow and white
To continue our journey of teaching and learning
Providing each other with healing, love and courage
As simple, compassionate and magnanimous beings
Only when we resist the temptation of the easy path.
Shall we start living and not missing so much
In the end we are just kids and no prophets
Excited and nervous to enter the difficult road
Of learning to live, grow and evolve.
We may continue our journey together
Or we may drifted apart in our own roads to future
But if we were long lost brothers and sisters and lovers
One day again we will be destined to find each other.
He walked me out of the forest
The smell
The air
The sweetness
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Ha Thi Lan Anh
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Comentarii
Tina T. H. Lee | Mar 31st, 2004
I like the natural flow of your piece. Simple sentences, but substantial spirit. =)
cuando hay tiempo... Michael Newton-McLaughlin | May 5th, 2004
I want to hear this in the voice of its author... do not be shy to stumble over words... all of us do. I have probably read this 20 or 30 times and never commented, because I could not think of what to say but thank you. And then I realized that the only thing I wanted was to hear it in person... and then I can probably truly express my appreciation :-)
impressive DIALA CHIBUIKEM ONYEBUCHI | Jun 16th, 2004
Its really wonderful and I love it
Fantastic poem! Zorica Vukovic | Dec 1st, 2004
I think this just has to become the global cultural treasure! It's better than the Diary of Ana Frank for its authenticity and for the healing effect of love and the courage that wins all wars and doesn't have to hide anywhere any more! We are very lucky for having opportunity to enjoy this absolutely superb poem from its beginning to the end! You are so lucky to experience and create this, together! This is the quantity of luck, love happiness and fulfillment enough to cure all unhappy loves of the world! Thanks God!
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