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Where are you now going?
Are you leaving me again?
Of course I wish you would stay,
even for the night,
Have you not yet understood?
You are a ray of light in my darkness
which dispels my nightmare
as I awaken from my restless sleep
in my lonely erratic world,
You are my calm.
You are the structure to my wild imagination,
which does not know where the nightmare ends
and reality begins,
You are my right mind.
You are a gentle artist
who with a firm hand
knows how to put together the fragments of my ravaged soul
without breaking them again
In your hands they come together.
And I am a girl in love,
for whom you are the sunrise and sunset
the lunar light, the Sol in Solar System…
What more could I ask of life
than that I might be by your side
night and day?
stay…
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Akinwole Philips | May 12th, 2005
pure! emerging from the heart.
Light in the darkness melanie mae | Nov 2nd, 2005
Yet rocks and men can do these things but what happens next? He turns into a pile of human waste.
Lucia | Jan 18th, 2006
Thanks for your support pebbles. However, I must take responsibility for my blindness and that I was always loving guys who did not return the sentiment. Especially this poem. He was spineless, feeble...here is a comment I wrote in retrospect concerning this poem in particular, and my poems in general: "27.10.2004 personal observations upon revision: It is so sad, the way I dream the men I have loved into being the man I love. How, with my poetry, the love in my heart can adorn an ape to look like an Adonis…how I have deceived myself by my own love. Tuomo was not great, but I made him great. He was a pathetic, ingratiating coward whom I dreamed into a loving angel."
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