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Who am I? Is the question
Scratching my mind.
No one can define me
Myself too, can’t define
And explain; who am I.
Am I not like others?
Sometimes hurts my mind
And says no by the nature
Around, which I can’t find.
Wind blows, river flows
Nature laughs and calls me.
Somebody call me son, friend
And brother, but I damn care
Because I don’t know who am I roaming here.
I am given a name which I even don’t know
Smooth throat calls me
I turn to go
But who is she I don’t know.
She might be my beloved
I think so, unfortunately
I am pulled slowly towards
Her and legs want to go.
With a slight feel I touch her
She kisses me, I couldn’t know what for
But I was able to remember myself
And was able to introduce own self.
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Suneboy
Hello, friends.
Creation is the greatest indicator of aptitude. Try to be creative, not imitative.
I was inspired to write articles when I got the first award for my poem in the inter-school poem competition.
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Love... Emperor Omorogiuwa Edionseri | Apr 24th, 2009
So "she" finally assisted the poet to be "able to introduce own self". "She kisses"!
Interesting Post Zubli Zainordin | Apr 27th, 2009
Who am I...? You asked.
So, who are you...?
You are a unique being, one of the creations of the God, existing an invisible energy, in a space in between a physic world - a soul observer, and a physical world - a huwman experiencer, (w added to huwman as a respect for women), within a lifespan - the sacred journey.
The clue to know, you or not you, is simple. For as long as any individual can say "my" or "your", then, not you.
Only when, an individual can say, "I" or "you", yes, you.
That means, now you are able to know you, by distinguishing all "the your" from "the you".
Yashoda | May 25th, 2009
WOW!!! yeti Ramro kabita hamro saathi le lekhchha hola bhanne ta malai bishwas nai thiyen...ab ta kibilai pani flop parne bhayo timi le hai...
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