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It’s inside me burning and reaching to my brain,
Very hot inside and outside it’s cold and didn’t stop the rain.
How could that weather be so intimate it making me insane?!
This circle around us is almost smoking from the flame!
How could that area turn into a fireplace?
Intensity became so weak in front of those waves!
Waving and waving in a sea of fire roasting the air.
Rhythmic dance drawing through the Milky Way!
Sometime on Pluto or even Venus it’s all the same.
Groaning of the thunder increasing, insisting for much more heavy rain,
Touching each others holding, hitting the atmosphere,
Rocking our souls in such a lovely pain,
Calling each others loader and loader asking for more escape!
The sound of water dripping on the trees, the windows, evaporating and mixing with the salty taste
Much quack inside us; upside down into the earth break.
The wind was so strong; it carried the seed and pushed it into the deep tunnel of clay!
Conjoining tighter; embracing, worming, and covering the terrace!
Culmination increasing much more and more, freezing the moves for a dazzling stare!
Tears of happiness and sweat of tiredness all together in one invisible pail!
Watering the seeds, and cooling the frame!
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To me, writing poems is like when I need to scream and get everything out of me!
It's food for my soul!
It's like the crying of a child asking for his toy!
It's like the most beautiful view on earth!
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Great Matija | Aug 24th, 2004
Karim what you wrote in this poem is so true! Many of us can find ourselves in this poem! Keep up your good work, and i hope your muse comes often! Great poem!
Power of nature Nour Mosawy | Aug 24th, 2004
Power of nature inyour words, and indeed very nice title you chose for the poem. Intimacy...do u think it's in every part in us? in every feeling? work, love, life?
Awsome!!!!! Kesan | Dec 14th, 2004
That poem was intence. I could feel the meaning of your words. I read the other comments but I almost can' t explain what I felt reading that poem. It was trully incredibale and something that could come from only a great mind. Thank you!!!!:) :)
Ashleigh | Feb 7th, 2005
wow! your poems are great! the level of poetry i write in is like crap compared to that. and i happen to have an ancestor named Sir Francis Bacon........................
Cherrie Kong | Sep 16th, 2005
Wow. :)
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