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I keep going
I keep going
My eyes shut
I keep fighting
I keep fighting
I awake suddenly on the brink of destruction
I move fast
I move swift
I extend my limbs until satisfaction
I keep going
I relax
I forget
I close my eyes to peace
To a place of imagination
A place of prediction
I dreamt, I breathe unconsciously
To be awakened by a slight memory of awareness
I yawn and I remember
My body begs, my brain refuses
I would keep going for years
Although, certain things can be sacrificed
It's amazing what you can't control
Finally a beautiful relaxation
A very peaceful meditation
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you are right Ebuenyi Ikenna D. | Apr 30th, 2004
you are right ;there are things we just can't control.
awesome Jessica Rose Ayers-Perkins | May 3rd, 2004
you're a really good writer...i love poetry, especially about life.
Myself Carlos M. Vazquez | May 10th, 2004
As I read this, I pictured myself in bed trying to come out of my dream/reality, but couldn't.
I can relate Rarest Of The Rare | Jul 4th, 2004
This poem is exactly how i feel about school...maybe it's like the night before a test or the night before a term paper is done...if i take a break i forget what i just studyed, i'm tired but keep going, my brain refuses...u really knwo how to work ur words..good job
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